Short Story
From the start, Kieran was an obvious outcast in his school. There was something about him that was different to every other kid, obviously he had different looks and personality, but everyone’s different in there own respect. Kieran however, had something that no one else did; this was in fact a superpower. He had a tough time at school as it was, so he wouldn’t flaunt this power about because he knew the other children would tear him apart for it as well he was constantly picked on for having an unknown fear of zombies so people would chase him acting as a zombie. It got to the point where he couldn’t be around people who aren’t the same as him so he applied for a college named ‘Merriweather academy’ this allowed him to be surrounded by other students who also have superpowers.
From the start, Kieran was an obvious outcast in his school. There was something about him that was different to every other kid, obviously he had different looks and personality, but everyone’s different in there own respect. Kieran however, had something that no one else did; this was in fact a superpower. He had a tough time at school as it was, so he wouldn’t flaunt this power about because he knew the other children would tear him apart for it as well he was constantly picked on for having an unknown fear of zombies so people would chase him acting as a zombie. It got to the point where he couldn’t be around people who aren’t the same as him so he applied for a college named ‘Merriweather academy’ this allowed him to be surrounded by other students who also have superpowers.
A few months later, Kieran was at
Merriweather academy, he’d fought through the nerves and had settled in
well. It was now normal for him to fly and
teleport where and when he wanted because every other student had the ability
to do things like Kieran. Merriweather academy was a lot smaller than his
previous school, this is because only tiny popularity have special powers and
actually know about having them, occasionally there would only be no more than
5 students in a lesson, it took Kieran a while to get his head around but found
it easier to get on with people and concentrate. A main rule which teachers would
constantly make it clear that you are not allowed to miss use your powers, or
even use them without a teachers permission.
It was, what Kieran thought, a normal day
at college, same old things happening, practicing his powers like usual. But
something strange began to happen, the clock struck 12.12pm and the ground
started to crack and tremble, everyone assumed it was an earthquake and
followed the general procedure. It wasn’t until the sky switched black, a storm
came flooding in, that they realized this, wasn’t any normal storm, this was a
Zombie apocalypse! Zombies came out the floor, from the sky and just left,
right and centre. The problems they were facing could only be stopped by each
student’s powers. The only thing they could do was fight back, which they
successfully do, but this means the secret about their powers is out because
the city witnessed them abnormally defeat the zombies.
Pitch
An outcast student, Kieran applies to move colleges as of his powers. Things begin to finally run smoothly for him, this is until an attack of zombies lets the secret out. #TWEETPITCH
Pitch
An outcast student, Kieran applies to move colleges as of his powers. Things begin to finally run smoothly for him, this is until an attack of zombies lets the secret out. #TWEETPITCH
I like the idea of your story :)
ReplyDeleteI am going to give you some constructive advice. I think that the structure of the story is well presented, however there are lots of full stops so it feels like it's constantly stopping and starting. I really like the idea of the character starting off at his old school and being bullied, because it shows the audience the context of Kieran's background and what has influenced his behaviour now.
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