Improved
This image has been improved by blurring out the background because it allows the character to be the main focus point. As well the previous image was breaking the rules of the rule of thirds as it was directly in the centre whereas this new one is slightly to the right. Also the first one was looking directly into the camera, this one now looks off into another direction showing.
Original
We have improved this image by taking down the posters originally behind the character. They needed to be moved as they were taking the main focus point away from the character. As well, the original was a bit too much in the centre, meaning it was breaking the rules of the rule of thirds, so this one is slightly more off centre.
The previous image needed improvement due to the scenery and the bin in the background. We decided to swap sides with the picture to avoid a less cluttered background to keep the focus point on the characters to avoid anyone getting confusion.
Original
Like the previous image with the zombies, it needed improvement because of the cluttered background. Keeping the focus point on whats actually going on. It also needed changing because it had a bin in the background as well as we couldn't have 2 pictures relating to the same thing with opposite backgrounds.
We improved this image because of the cluttered background, as of the posters which didn't help it represent a canteen very well. So we took the image from a different angle to include the vending machines. It is also a little off centre showing the rule of thirds.
We improved the previous image by taking it at an angle, this is because the original one was breaking the rules of the rule of thirds as Callum's character was directly in the centre and as well was looking directly at the camera. We also changed it because the background wasn't very nice in the previous one so we wanted to show identifiable that it was outside the main entrance.
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