Appraising the Rough Cut

Audio

Strengths:

• Dialogue works well and is very engaging

Weaknesses:

• I currently have no sound effects
• There is no background music yet

Improvements:

I shall include sound effects and music and cut out bad sounds

Special Effects

Strengths:

• I have 3 special effects
• One is teleportation which my feedback shows people found effective, showing good quality
• Another is invisibility which looks really good as well as good quality
• The invisibility fits in well because i'm creeping up on friends who are talking about me
• The teleportation effect looks good because he's going to the toilet to cry as he's been bullied

Weaknesses:

• A visual effect is a fireball which is a bit unrealistic at the moment especially since the quality of the fire ball is good and the film quality is poor

Improvements:

I plan to improve the Fireball effect because of the poor film quality as well as I look at the camera so I will re film it

Sequence

Strengths:

• The sequence appears to make sense to people who have given feedback
• It is very entertaining
• Flows well
• Set dressing is all good 

Weaknesses:

• Poor acting
• Editing is quite jumpy from different shots

Improvements:

Re film parts that are bad to avoid it being jumpy.
One part that could do with improvements is when Callum's character moves school, people often get confused, so we have decided to show him walking into the front of the school and showing a sign with the school name to avoid confusion.