Feedback from: Christen S
Does it make narrative sense: Yes
Do the special effects fit well with the sequence?
How could they be improved?: Yes - teleport to toilet
Is the dialogue engaging?: Yes
What do the sound FX, ambient sounds
and music add?: Background noise could be added when they walk outside when it's quiet
Is it entertaining?: Very!
What would you do to improve the sequence?: When they kick Callum, you could see sam was kicking the ground.
Feedback from: Alexander Purvis
Does it make narrative sense: Yes, its about a boy who gets bullied then moves school where people have magic/super powers.
How could they be improved?: Yes, I like the teleport one the best, and I also like how katie turns up in the scene but didn't see 3 specific effects.
Is the dialogue engaging?: It's alright but i think that the tone of voice is to mono toned and should have something to it.
What do the sound FX, ambient sounds
and music add?: I couldn't hear any added sound effects, music or ambient sound, but think that you could add some to the kicking to make it sound like guys kicking the ground.
Is it entertaining?: I think it has a good story line and is very entertaining
What would you do to improve the sequence?: I would dub the dialogue and add some people talking in the background when inside to make it sound better.
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